i need a conclusion sentence for this essay. please help.?we are talking about Optimism in English.
Could someone give a good conclusion for this Essay?
Optimism is which people choose to look on the positive side of the situation. For example, an optimistic person will only think a loss of game is just an experience. People need to realize that their thoughts are very powerful. Learning how to think positively will lead to better physical and mental health.
Optimism not only helps a person's health but also helps to control a person's life. For example, "optimism motivates individual to take control of their lives, while depression has the opposite effect" (Kliff). Apparently, people can't control their own life when they are depressed. Positive thinking has the opposite effects of depression. Also, "what goes in your head has an affect in your body" (Jayson). Having bad thoughts not only affects a person's mind but a person's body. For that person, the death rate increases. According to Elizabeth Phelps, " the problem with depression is that people don't engage in actions that could make their lives better" (Kliff). Some people are afraid when they find out they have a disease. People think that nothing can cure the disease.
Another thing that being optimistic can do is lower someone's death rate. For example, "health and happiness is strengthening the immune system" (Lopper). People who volunteer on an organization lower their death rate by 44%. Also, "people tend to avoid life-shortening vices like smoking and drinking excessively" (Laliberte 52). People don't have a choice but to smoke when they are depressed. Some people quit smoking to avoid death. According to Dr. Small, "the supports of solid relationship boost the immune function" (Laliberte 51). A relationship such as husband/wife, girlfriend/boyfriend helps people increase their defense for diseases and death. Positive thinking helps people to live longer.
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Optomism may be in our minds but effects our whole life! idk if this is what u were looking for hope it helps!!
Ramona-please step back!
The next time you consider whether YOUR glass is half empty of half full, remember, that it's not how we impact the world , but how the world impacts us.
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